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More please. This is rather good so far. I like how Harry still remembered Sirius and Remus. I like that he kept his memories, even though he was deaged. He did keep his memories right? Well, if not, I still like how he recognized Remus and Sirius. The only think I have to say is Remus wouldn't be the one to blame Severus. Sirius would, but I guess how you have it is good too. Is there going to be an arguement over the fact that Harry is staying with Severus? I hope so. Could you please make the chapters longer. That are rather short and I do wish to read a bit more for each chapter. Has Harry started to like Severus since he wanted Severus to pick him up? Well, please update soon. I like this story and will be patiently awaiting the next chapter.

great, please update soon.

wow please update soon *kisses*

i like how it goes, even if it lacks of descriptions it is still quite adictive, i specially like the fact that this deaging-potion-fic doesnt involve a small and traumatized Harry getting pitty from everyone that hears how his family treats him among other cliches, it still needs the harsh sarcastic badass potion master, but he has said so little that is difficult to say if he is like that;
i really hope you can get past that writers block because i am really enjoying this new and fresh idea of deagingpotionfic. dont take too long!

one thing that can help the fic and your block is to write the ending first, not the whole thing, just the main objective you wish to achive, and start adding some trouble, nice events, romantic ones, angst, funny, etc etc until the characters get to the finish line, and thats how its easier to finish and write more intrincate and long chapters!

dont take too long!

AHAHAHAHA! I loved that line! "Severus this is all your fault." AHAHAHAHAHA! And little HArry recognized Sirius and Remus! AWWWWW! the cuteness! I cant wait for more! Please make them longer!!!!

Love this story!

well what's going to happen. you've tickled my interest but where is the rest. update soon *kisses*

very interesting start. I'd really like to see where this goes. will you tell me when you get the next chapter up? please

please update thank u
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Nice start. I can't wait to see if what Harry's reaction is. Will he cry at all the strangers?