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for Blood Debt

by firedragonsjewel

schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving it...please keep going.
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so i've been doing some catch up...it has got to suck to owe a life debt to someone and not know when its going to come in but if its a debt to draco it cant be all that bad right? lol. i wonder what is in store. second of all the whole debbie "i'll put glamour on tonight and play any role u want lover" kind of thing reminds me of that episode from charmed but thats off track lol. i cant wait to see what you have planned for the debt. what a wonderful way to get it rollling with a demanding Draco. gotta love it.
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far I like the story line with Ron. Not sure I like what is going through Draco's mind though. But does he love her or lust after her - seems like lust to me. I understand the Lift/Blood Debt but the literal control he has over Hermione?? Just not sure yet. It is too OOC for Hermione to let that happen. But I will keep reading so keep writing!! I hope you put alot of details into the contract.
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn.....
person mystique
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! thanks for updating so soon, but please cassandra don't tell me Ron is going to do something terrible to hermione in the next chapter! I hope draco will be there to protect her!
person tawright
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far. Keep up the good work. Update Soon

Tale
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is great I luv it the only thing I wish is that it was a little bit longer! lol great job
person smmz79
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah your backkkk i was a huge fan of your last fic and i read it faithfully.... i love the premise of this already we all know draco is a heartthrob and we all know hermione loves research but what happens when they are at the extreme and they merge.... i think this will be a great story and i can not wait to see where you take it....
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooo!! That was really good! The only thing I have to say is that you need to write more! Hm, there's a few small errors...wondering do you have a beta?
person smmz79
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great insight on draco and what he is doing... boy is hermione in for it... i can not wait for the exchange between them when he finally lets her know of his intentions.... ok i am excited for your next chap... please update soon... like now .... ;)

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