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for The Last Gift

by AndreaLorraine

schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7 Gah!!! What a place to leave us. This is fantastic...but I hope by all that is magical that this is is only part 1 of a very long chapter with part 2 on the way?? Great job! This story is completely engaging! Cheers!
person maddie50
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, poor Lucius. Yet, even in his misery he was able to lend his strength to Hermione. That was so moving.
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 6: Yeah, I
person Mia
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That little puddle over there? It's mine. But it's your fault. I feel like I have the shaakes after eading this chapter. It was brutally and terrifyingly beautiful. Captivating.

~Mia
person crystal
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Simply wonderful. The story is intriguing and very well thought out. Update soon.
person chyara
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! what a great cliffie... her parents are dead..
i was on the edge of my seat the whole time.
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
[Squeeeees!] Great chapter. Loved the action and the fact that Nagini is already dead, by popular vote. Cheers!
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This chapter (Ch. 4) had a very dark ending. EEK! I hope he cannot find Hermione's parents! That would be terrible. Ugh. Great story. You're challenging Lucius and your readers to see the hope for a better tomorrow. Cheers!
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5. I hope Rodulphus' presence in Austrailia doesn't mean that the DL has located Hermoine's parent, but I'm kidding myself. At the very least, he's got a lead on them. Crap!
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6. Oh, you're eeeeeeeeevil. That was a horribly mean thing to do to both Lucius and Hermione. At least neither of them can die--for the moment. Double crap! This is fantastic. You're weaving such a lovely and dark story. Well the polyjuice is going to wear-off soon. I hope your muse doesn't make us wait too long! What about Hermione being pregnant with Lucius' child? I know it's to obvious to be true, but I'm waiting [hoping] for that! Cheers!

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