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schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Snape_Godess, you are a Godess! Thank you so much for Part II. I swallowed the first and couldn't wait for the second. And now, here it is. I thought, okay, Lucius and Moine will struggle a bit, get their everyday life together, but what did you do? You wiped all of my perceptions away and painted a whole new picture, just as if you would have had a new canvas. YES, STRIKE!!!! I adore it. Its a cool new setting, an intriguing plot and what is best of all - it consists of two men: Lucius and Severus. Oh yes. Despite the zombies, I want to be in that castle with them. Who wouldn't?
I can't wait to get my eyes on the update. Thank you so much.
LOL, Alex
person kittycat30
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Who would kill you for letting her have hot bathroom sex w/ Sev? Yummy! Of course, now she has to make it up to Lucius & give him some hot sex too :) As soon as I read your name, I read the story - never disappointed!
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Lovely, this was a great chapter! I smiled cheekily when she got down with Sevvie LOL, and then felt a little bad for her when he pulled away quickly. Luci is all about the lovin' (we should know...) Anway darlin I had the worst day at work, and to come home to this was great! Even better than a naked Alex LOL (Ok, I exaggerated there) but it made my day a lot better! LOL,

Lotsa love,

Vic

xx
person Taylor
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your stories. The only thing with me is, you're very sympathetic to Severus (which I 100% support) but, it makes me want Hermione to end up with him. Just...let him down gently...and get Sev a girl! :) Keep up the amazing work!
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see the second installment of Adventurous Hearts posted! I love the combination of adventure and smut. And now Hermione has a difficult choice: Severus or Lucius. Does she really have to choose? I'm sure she could manage both! ^_^; It's definitely worth a try.
person carha
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I lose my comp for 2 days and I come back to find 6 chapters up. This is great so far. Looking forward to seeing more. I know this a LM/HG story, but I'm still glad you put a little Severus in there. He deserves a happy ending too. Great work hun, Can't wait for your next update!
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course I know whats next!! I won't give it away though *grins mischieviously*

I'm thinking you write some of the hottest sex scenes on this site, really, i am not a huge Sev fan, you know this, but when you write him...well, he can't get naked fast enough...LMAO.

Fantastic writing as always!!!

Lady Blue Eyes -
xoxoxo

person Raine
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
brilliant.
I haven't gotten to review for a while since my computers all wonky, but I'll take this one to say I LOVE the idea of a three part story. It's a promise that there's always more and I nearly live off of your writing.

Keep posting!
-Raine
person Shetan
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful installment of this series. I wonder how a triad between Lucius, Severus and Hermione each different in their own way, yet complementing each other as a whole. Please update soon.
person Larrabee
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
But what about Severus? Is she just going to lead him on? He loves her. And she would love him too if he was able to open himself up a bit more.

I am confuzzled!

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