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by ColdWaterFairy

schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really great update. For a second there I was waiting for Draco to accidentally moan Hermione's name. lol I can't wait for more!!
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's amazing...please continue
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed this story so far, but I have to admit that this chapter bothered me a little. To have Draco having sex right in front of Hermione just seems so horrible.
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Personally I'd think it would be a turn on to seeing Draco in action but a turn off to consider doing the same with him at a later date if I was Hermoine. But great chapter
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you are having them come to care for one another in a new and imaginative way! And, I really like the mystery you have going. :-) Thank you and I look forward to your next update.

Thanks! HG4eva
person kazfeist
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for updating, and we get a cliffie, as well. :D
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor molly and draco.
person kazfeist
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the update....I am still very engrossed in this mystery, and I can't wait for the next piece of the puzzle. :D
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The new summary is great, another well done chapter!
person smmz79
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah another chap!!!! ok so draco and hermione are starting to realize they are having feelings for each other of course that was inevitable.... so draco is really trying to help her... why was he having a panic attack? memories maybe? ron was really procrastinating on telling his mom but really i could understand i mean hello it is his mom.... i was giggling at the part when harry and ginny arrived and mrs weasley asked about hermione and harry glared at ron and ron just ignored him... i thought that was funny for some reason i could just see the look in harrys eyes and ron looking anywhere but at harry... but ron did tell her of course i am not sure that he did it quite like harry thought he would but that is soooo ron... ok so we got a little glimpse of our mystery guy and girl... hmmm so the dead girl almost escaped well no wonder why willow was pissed at her man i would be too that girl could have ruined her little enterprise there.... so i keep thinking about astoria hmmm i am rather interested in why she is here i know you introduced her threw pansy but still??? ok so she does nothing that is an awful lot of free time on her hands what does she do with it all.... and daphne, hmmm?? so more on her she was really affected by what she saw and what happened during the war, she could have caught these girls because she felt that it was their fault that she is the way she is??? or maybe astoria is so upset about her sister that she is getting revenge on the people that she feels could have caused it??? and how convenient would that be if she was willow and she has been looking for hermiones pic and it is right under her nose??? but i would like to believe everything that she said to draco at lunch but i am not so sure??? so IF daphne or astoria is our willow then who is our mystery guy??? i mean that would line up well with blaise because they knew him in school and that could be the connection BUT what is blaises motive why would he do this?? what are the connection with the other girls were they ministry people maybe in the way of blaise becoming minister and that is why they are placed in these paintings??? i do not know i am having trouble thinking it is blaise i know he would do anything to get what he wants but i am not sure if he would do that??? I mean i am sure he would kill but this almost seems too involved for him?? hmmm well i think i am starting to confuse myself i can not wait till the next chap i am looking forward to more hints...

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