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You've got a good start going here. I'm enjoying your plot line and how the mystery is playing out. Some minor concrit, you might want to consider changing your summary. The fact that you've said Hermione is stuck in a painting in the summary left me feeling somewhat flat during the first chapter because it pretty much gave away what the missing link was, and what would happen once it was resolved. In the second chapter you laid out that the mystery isn't so much as to where the girls are but who is putting them there, or who the accomplice is, and so the feeling from the first chapter was lost and my interest grew. You've done a good job of portraying Draco, I'm excited to see how his character developes and how Hermione continues to deal with the fact that he has changed.

I am really enjoying your story, and I can't wait to see what happens next!! I have an idea of who the 'mystery wizard' is, but I"m not going to say it. I want to see if I'm right.

I am really enjoying this, please update soon.

Thanks so much for updating! What a nice characterization of Astoria! In so many of the postwar fics, she's evil, so that Draco can leave her to be with Hermione. Thanks for making her human! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Yay I'm so happy you updated! That cliffy you left us with the time before was just cruel. lol Great update, I can't wait for more!!

i totally adored your chap and do indeed want more!

Oh Wow what a great chap... first i would like to comment on the draco/hermione part of this chap: I liked it I like that you still have that tension between them that they had at school... a lot of fics just totally jump over that part and you have not you are making them face it head on of course they kind of have to she is stuck in a painting and he has said painting up in his bedroom.... ok next I think that harry is starting to pull things together while he is still slightly confused about all of the details i think that he is really starting to get it... oh and i think that art gallery manager is starting to smell awful fishy... hmmmm i was trying to switch the letters around in willow suntree to see what i could get it to spell i am trying to see if i can figure out who it is... in my last review i guessed percy sorry i could not come up with anyone so i threw him under the bus???? :-) wow astoria greengrass very nice i love what you did with her in this she is a really great character and i love the way you have written her, she seems to be dracos conscious... fabulous chap let me try this guessing thing again.... hmm i would say blaise but he seems to obvious... who is this rebecca i know she is taking over hermiones case but is she someone that we need to take notice of or is she just a filler... also what does astoria do as a living??? i am just wondering also what is the connection between all of these girls i mean i know hermione was thrown in there bc she was getting to close to the truth but what about the other girls i am not sure that this is just about some painter that wants to make more money i think this is about pay back... ok so i guess i do not have a guess right now but i can not wait to read more and try to piece this stuff together great job oh and i started reading the fallout it is great i really like it so far so thank you for the link.....

This piece is brilliant - I'll be watching it avidly for updates!

I love this story, its so unique and a really good read, looking forward to further chapters :)

The Fallout IS great....she's not been updating as quickly as in the past, but Lorett's her beta, and according to HER last post in ThreeKeys, she's had a lot of bad RL stuff going on. (Lorett, not Sage). I like your story, though. Very original, and I can't wait to find out who the bad folks are. :D