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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Freaking hilarious. I love how you went from blushing, shy and sweet Hermione to the woman who rings a death knoll for Rita Skeeter.
Treat to us to at least one more smutty loveliness with a not so virginal Hermione...I can only imagine what corruption our handsome Slytherin has inflicted upon her.
Treat to us to at least one more smutty loveliness with a not so virginal Hermione...I can only imagine what corruption our handsome Slytherin has inflicted upon her.
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A lovely ending. Maybe you can convince someone to illustrate the boys and their markings. :D
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah i loved this chap and i just loved how you wrote hermione and draco each during the love scene!!!!
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA omg that was great i ABSOLUTELY love the way you wrote severus i think it was brilliant and how he was rambling on about the evil satoshi twin and hermione killing everyone....
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow i was wondering if rita would do something and she did not disappoint did she.... holy crap she went sraight at it and with hermiones whole family there wow she really has NO shame... i can not believe it and severus was banking on eriko but akiko up and surprised everyone i loved what she had to say to rita and honestly if i was rita i would take the knife in the lung threat seriously.... i LOVED severus i laughed so hard he was sitting at the table eating the cheesecake HA HA and the dinner and a show comment OMG
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that was kind of a deep chap i mean with draco showing his fear and them sharing an intimate moment without sex having to be involved very nice!!!
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow well that was a cliff holy crap what is going to happen now
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow now this is interesting and what an interesting twist with this story...
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aaahhh lucius cares... i love th little comment about georges ear that was a great nod to the deathly hallows...
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! this story was awesome. I really enjoyed reading it and you did a wonderful job!!!