rate_review Reviews

Oh. My. God. This was exquisite. Amazing. I liked the first three chapters...(obviously, if I kept clicking on this story)...but the fourth chapter BLEW ME AWAY!!! Seriously. OH MY GOD. There are not words. I've been squealing and hopping around the room and sinking into my chair, muttering about how I can die happy now.

That was unbelievable. I loved it. I don't know how you did it, but it was one of THE most realistic sex scenes I've ever read...especially first-time sex. Thank you so much for writing that!!! That was amazing. I was on instant messenger with my friends while reading it, and I'm like, "OH MY GOD you HAVE to go read this!!!" so yeah...SO GOOD!!!

I am sorry for not reviewing before. I did read all of the chapters, and I liked them. Good ideas with the "trust" games (I've played those before...I have trust issues lol) and Luna was wonderful! I liked the maze idea, even though I was like, "Awwww, Cedric!"

But the most amazing, by far, was the sex!!!! And protective!Snape I love it when he's protective of Draco! SO CUTE! Anyway, so yeah, this was good beyond words, and I hope I have adequately conveyed my fangirly screaming reaction to you...LOVED IT!!!

cute, happy, feel good kind of piece. Thoroughly enjoyed every bit of it and wish it was longer, but actually, you said what you needed and it was just perfect. Would like to ask for a sequel, always love Ron's responses, given how you have handled your characters, it could be a hoot. Think about it? pretty please?

Children can be such bastards. Ugh!
It's good Harry stood up for Draco... somehow!
Can't wait for the next instalment. =P

another great chapter, very curious about the ROR, very enjoyable so far.

Hahaha! Draco sure knows how to play Harry! And poor Harry...so confused. And what's up with the Room of Requirement?! Please update soon!

I like the story so far its great will wait for update

I like this story. I like the path it's taking, and I really like Luna in general, so yay that she's there. Keep going and fast!

This is good I can't wait to read more. The interaction between the boys is great it makes me laugh. :)

I am really excited about this one! ^.^ Harry and draco are just adorable! and the whole teams thing was brilliant! Luna made me laugh! Shes always good to have in a story! Please keep updating!

absolutely delightful can't wait for the next one. This is so very well done, not a bobble in spelling or grammer to slow down the flow. Great job!