Reviews for What Are You Worth? - Harry Potter

person Darkless

schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Wow. I thought this was going to be just a silly piece of drivel, like so many other fics I've read, and was pleasently surprised to find that it was well written, had an intriguing plot and interesting characters.

I honestly think that with simple name changes, this could be in the original section, as there is really very little that resembles the HP Universe.

I'm enjoying reading this very much, with poor abused Harry and his varied older brothers that, while confidant and bold on their own, are almost as afraid of their father as Harry is. It's good they have this chance away from home to finally show the regard and affection they have for their baby brother that they never dared to show before. Harry feels not so alone and is growing in confidance. Not a lot, he's way too downtrodden and 'submissive' to just spring forward without care, but that's understandable with the way he's been beaten down all his life, blamed for the death of his mother that is in reality no fault of his own.

Of course, we can all guess what the priestess saw when she touched Harry, and meeting his 'intened' in the forest under the full moon was obviously destiny. Morning comes and Harry scampers fearfully back to his brothers, understandably in character. But Greyback's anxiety was refreshing.

The next chapters are going to be fun and I hope we don't have to wait too long for them. Thank you for sharing your tale weaving skills.

person Elfin69

schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Terrfic chapter, I wonder what will happen when Fenrir gets back and see's Harry (hopefully that day) to save everyone else from his wrath and that he and Harry get along once Harry realizes that Fenrir is the Alpha. I am glad that Caspian stood up for his brother and can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon.

person dolphindreamer

schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM

If reviewing makes you update faster I shall review every chapter! (It's still midterms so I am extremely grateful for the quick update! If you updated this quick all the time I'd love you forever!) I think Harry's flight response was a good one, as was Fenrir's possesive anger. I do have a question though of why he didn't think harry ran away? Also wanted to point out that Harry should still flinch away from his brothers. One time of his brother standing up for him is not going to vanish years of inbred instinct. I missed Fenrir in this chapter, he should have had more of a part. And how is he going to react to the real Harry? I mean he can barely speak to his brothers, let alone a massive dominant wolf and the head Alpha. Can't wait! Keep it going! (Longer chapter update next time? *puppy eyes* Please?)

person star101

schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM

I don't know whats going to happen next. What's going to happen when fenrir finds harry with a bruise? Please keep updating.

person jddammann

schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Very good and as always, you leave us wanting more! :-)

person Shadoweye86