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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG you have to continue this and soon i love it. please update.
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is very good! it looks promising. please write more.
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Start! I can tell it will become a great story! Update soon, please.
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it! email me when you update please: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story!!!! hope 4 more soon:)
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I'm very curious to see how you will portray Fenrir; I've only read on story so far that truly captured his character. However, I have confidence in you! On another note, there are many grammatical errors in your story. I would highly suggest investing in a Beta reader. For example, you use "eyes'," when it should simply be "eyes." Don't fret, though, it happens to the best of us :] If you'd like, I'd even Beta read for you, myself! Well, good luck to you, and drop me an e-mail if you wish to take me up on my offer.
-ari.
-ari.
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eh, sorry. Wasn't logged in!
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story already.
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh a very interesting start I like this already. I loved how you wrote the angst in this, I could really feel it