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for Darkness Within

by neelix

schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh.. this is my Rrrrrr and Rrrrrring! very nice and realistic. Loved Severus' comment on teaching l'il Albus some Slytherin secrets! lol....
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o evil evil evil! lol that was fantastic! i can't for the next part
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh, I've got a craving for some lovely lemons!

I really love this story and I am looking forward to what happens next.

btw, I love that Elbow song.
person ismene5
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uaaahhhh.
You are so cruel.
I want more more more.

Thank you!
person holden88
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is great. i love how you go deep into the character's complex emotions
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now I am crying. I am a bit afraid, too. But really, really great job!

I love this story and I hope you won
person Tenar10r
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing all this time, this is a fabu story!
I'm looking forward to future chapters *impatient*
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great, yet sad chapter. I hope that Severus will tell Hermione how he feels now that she has informed him that she's leaving. I think that he doesn't want her to ever be with anyone else. If she leaves before he says anything to her, he could lose her forever. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.
person ismene5
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gods, I have butterflies too.
Wonderful chapter.
person ismene5
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, when will they be honest with each other?

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