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for Darkness Within

by neelix

person Muffy
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Thanks for the update!
person carha
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I look forward to your updates on it. You have a unique writing style that I enjoy. Please update again soon
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was too sad. Doing the right thing isn't fun.
person Muffy
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So hopeful and then heartbreaking. *sniff* Thank you for the lovely updates!
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was so sad i hope they find their way to each other soon
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I think that Hermione has come to love Severus just as much as he has come to love her, but yet they are afraid to say anything to each other. I hope that they do finally realize that they do love each other and start a relationship. That way if she does go to university she knows that Severus will truly be at home waiting for her. I look forward to reading more.
person Mmoirai
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awe. What an endearing story. I am loving it.
person Angie30
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Severus a Godfather that was so sweet! I giggled what he whispered to little Albus.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 13 - This was sweet. Not fluffy mind you, just nice. The Severus I know and believe in could be like this ... and that Ron would be like that, too.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I am glad that Harry and Ginny asked Severus to be Albus' godfather and that he accepted. I also thought that Harry giving Severus the picture was the right thing to do. It shows just how much Harry has matured. I can't wait to read more.

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