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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome story.
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Umm keep going please.. I would like to see more of this.
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. Keep it up - i'd like to see how it turns out.
clarice.
clarice.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The description of the blond seems like it is Draco. Draco and Harry are so yummy.
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This second chapter... no honey.
Just no... it came from nowhere and it landed in a place far away from the plot-line for our (the readers) POV.
Perhaps you should consider re-writing? Some explanation of what happened afterwards before suddenly pushing toward us unknown characters.
-Wynter
Just no... it came from nowhere and it landed in a place far away from the plot-line for our (the readers) POV.
Perhaps you should consider re-writing? Some explanation of what happened afterwards before suddenly pushing toward us unknown characters.
-Wynter
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
these three "new" characters have my attention. Very Much so. I am assuming "Jade" or "Viper" is supposed to be Harry....I like where this is going. Please keep up the very very VERY good work. I could see Harry with ANY of the three of these guys. And that is saying something from me....i am usually very set in my ways. You have opened my mind.
~Sophia Max-Anderson
~Sophia Max-Anderson
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you should make this into a full blown story. it is worthy of it...the only thing being the pairing choice...i dont know what would be better....Voldemort himself...Snape, Malfoy (either of them....even both)........this is a wonderful start...pls continue it.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looks promising actually. im interested as to where this may go.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is it one shot?? look like it to me, if not, it is good start
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
brovo