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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last chapters were positively BRILLLIANT! Just the perfect mix of everything I needed to make my day better. You have no idea how much I appreciate you for that. I about melted into a puddle of fangirl goo during the sex. Need I say...GUH! Hot and sweet. In short, perfect. You are truely talented!
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Those last two chapters-FANTASTIC! I was a bit worried for a while there about our boys. Brilliant writing!
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*big hug for Harry and Draco*
Ok, chapter breakdown: The Roo edition.
Hopsital scene: Intense. Man I felt bad for the boys. And I think you navigated it well. If you would have had the boys stay and listen to Arthur, it would have tweaked. But having Draco get up and leave and Harry follow him worked well. I don't think it would have been viable to handle that much emotional discord and remain together. Giving them time to escape and "lick their wounds" for lack of a better term, made it seem a bit more realistic. I think you should let the boys sleep in tomorrow. Maybe not even go to the hospital until after lunch if at all. Their relationship is shaky right now, but thankfully not broken.
Godric's Hollow: Very sweet. I love the fact that the nativs ebrace them. These are the people who erected the statue (which I always thought was a bit off, personally) and made the home into a monument of sorts. They live with a daily reminder of what could have been, and are therefore much more accepting of Harry and Draco. I like the townsfolk.
SO GLAD you are back love! I was getting worried! Glad my e-mail made you laugh, and yes I received your reply. When I heard the suspect was sighted I started clapping!
Loves!
Roo
Ok, chapter breakdown: The Roo edition.
Hopsital scene: Intense. Man I felt bad for the boys. And I think you navigated it well. If you would have had the boys stay and listen to Arthur, it would have tweaked. But having Draco get up and leave and Harry follow him worked well. I don't think it would have been viable to handle that much emotional discord and remain together. Giving them time to escape and "lick their wounds" for lack of a better term, made it seem a bit more realistic. I think you should let the boys sleep in tomorrow. Maybe not even go to the hospital until after lunch if at all. Their relationship is shaky right now, but thankfully not broken.
Godric's Hollow: Very sweet. I love the fact that the nativs ebrace them. These are the people who erected the statue (which I always thought was a bit off, personally) and made the home into a monument of sorts. They live with a daily reminder of what could have been, and are therefore much more accepting of Harry and Draco. I like the townsfolk.
SO GLAD you are back love! I was getting worried! Glad my e-mail made you laugh, and yes I received your reply. When I heard the suspect was sighted I started clapping!
Loves!
Roo
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey stranger -- long time no see. lol. Liked your new chapter to 'Break'. Pretty ansty - which I like. Some fics can just be too sappy. It's nice to have some of the angst in there. Keep the readers reading, laughing, crying..... Will Arthur deny it? Does Molly know? How long are they staying? Is there a next installment in that crazy mind of yours already plotting away? lol. Anyway.... good chapter from a fellow Coven member, even though we've all went our separate ways it seems. *sighs*. Miss it sometimes.
~tas
~tas
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You had me soooo scared! I soooo need chapter 8!!!
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I re-read chapter six like you said and it was probably a good idea because I'd forgotten a lot of what had happened. I still like the line where Harry just accidentally says Oh my god you did rape her, for some reason it stands out to me. I literally jumped up in my seat when I saw your story on the New Page, and my mental talk was like, OMG OMG OMG OMG YES YES YES YES lol.
But honestly? This chap did feel a little weird to me. I'm not sure exactly what it was either. I think it was that I felt like all they were doing was moving, just keep on moving, when it's something that should be still .... I'm not sure, I think what I'm saying is it was a little too fast paced. I don't know how that works out. But I did enjoy reading it all the same. I'm glad their relationship held on, but for me I felt like it should have torn apart for a bit ... but that's just coz I enjoy drama and situations where people are hurting just as much as the situations where they are in love.
And you're most welcome to pass the link on to my art etc. I don't tend to draw too much really, it's just an every now and then thing. I had a best friend when I was really young who was a brilliant artist and for some reason I always felt like I wasn't any good at it compared to her, and I think, us being young, she used to say things like its not as good as mine, etc. and it just made me not an enthusiastic artist. Which also compels me now to say ... it's not very good lol.
As for troubling study work, don't you just HATE it? I do. lol. Can't wait to be finished with it. It's too stressful for me, I'm just sooo over it. I'm glad you got through your final though! And as for leaving more than one review ... well you just might have to hack it alright? Jeez, what can I say, we just like talking to you way too much alright??? lol. jks
anyway! I'll talk to you later, hopefully when I put my next chapter up which should be soon, and then when you put your next chapter up, which I'm hoping is soon!! lol
much love,
~gorgeousbowneyes
But honestly? This chap did feel a little weird to me. I'm not sure exactly what it was either. I think it was that I felt like all they were doing was moving, just keep on moving, when it's something that should be still .... I'm not sure, I think what I'm saying is it was a little too fast paced. I don't know how that works out. But I did enjoy reading it all the same. I'm glad their relationship held on, but for me I felt like it should have torn apart for a bit ... but that's just coz I enjoy drama and situations where people are hurting just as much as the situations where they are in love.
And you're most welcome to pass the link on to my art etc. I don't tend to draw too much really, it's just an every now and then thing. I had a best friend when I was really young who was a brilliant artist and for some reason I always felt like I wasn't any good at it compared to her, and I think, us being young, she used to say things like its not as good as mine, etc. and it just made me not an enthusiastic artist. Which also compels me now to say ... it's not very good lol.
As for troubling study work, don't you just HATE it? I do. lol. Can't wait to be finished with it. It's too stressful for me, I'm just sooo over it. I'm glad you got through your final though! And as for leaving more than one review ... well you just might have to hack it alright? Jeez, what can I say, we just like talking to you way too much alright??? lol. jks
anyway! I'll talk to you later, hopefully when I put my next chapter up which should be soon, and then when you put your next chapter up, which I'm hoping is soon!! lol
much love,
~gorgeousbowneyes
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I'm hoping everything's good with you, haven't seen an update in a while, so I thought I'd leave a msg to see how you're going. I'm really missing reading Break!! lol. ah well.
Also, I remember from Dance that you linked us to some youtube videos of dances from ... Dancing with the Stars? And I also saw that you had dance knowledge, and I'm a bit of a dancer myself, but I don't have any ballroom experience. But, you know the show So You Think You Can Dance? Well here in Australia we had our first season a little while back, and I felt like sharing what I thought was the best dance of the season with you, thought you might appreciate it. It's a waltz, but a fairly modern version I suppose. Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ROTwJxow9Go . The guy, Rhys, was the runner up for the show, came so close to winning, and was my favourite. He's also highly gay and has been a drag queen lol. He also used to play an elf on a children's show here which has like singing and dancing and fairies and toadstools and things, which I'd actually seen before the show but totally didn't make the connection between the two until after the show and they mentioned it in an interview. But he's always stuck out to me coz in the initial audition stages they have a group audition thing, where they're grouped together with a few people, given a song, and they have like over night to chori something. Rhys was in a group that had all females except for him, so they did this thing where he was the ring leader and they were his puppets, but what really stood out, was that he wore stiletto boots and danced heaps good in a hip hop ish style in them!!! lol.
Well, thats about it from me, hope to see an update soon ish, but no pressure.
~gorgeousbowneyes
Also, I remember from Dance that you linked us to some youtube videos of dances from ... Dancing with the Stars? And I also saw that you had dance knowledge, and I'm a bit of a dancer myself, but I don't have any ballroom experience. But, you know the show So You Think You Can Dance? Well here in Australia we had our first season a little while back, and I felt like sharing what I thought was the best dance of the season with you, thought you might appreciate it. It's a waltz, but a fairly modern version I suppose. Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ROTwJxow9Go . The guy, Rhys, was the runner up for the show, came so close to winning, and was my favourite. He's also highly gay and has been a drag queen lol. He also used to play an elf on a children's show here which has like singing and dancing and fairies and toadstools and things, which I'd actually seen before the show but totally didn't make the connection between the two until after the show and they mentioned it in an interview. But he's always stuck out to me coz in the initial audition stages they have a group audition thing, where they're grouped together with a few people, given a song, and they have like over night to chori something. Rhys was in a group that had all females except for him, so they did this thing where he was the ring leader and they were his puppets, but what really stood out, was that he wore stiletto boots and danced heaps good in a hip hop ish style in them!!! lol.
Well, thats about it from me, hope to see an update soon ish, but no pressure.
~gorgeousbowneyes
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! What a mess!!! And you nailed it! I sooo need chapter 7!!!
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How the hell did I miss two chapters? *is confused* I check all the time! Ah well. I've found it now and am not letting go. *hugs story protectively*
I LIKE where you have them living. The little touches you invented were lovely. Absolutely lovely. Finding the hidden gift nearly broke me, because I do that all the time. The thought of my family finding little presents destined for them after I die made me run outside and hug my neighbor. Well, not literally. My neighbor is a creepy old man who likes my boobs. I tend to avoid him, actually. But I did call my daddy, so there's something.
Also, the scene in the hospital? Intense! Can just see the whole scene. Poor Mrs. Weasley all decrepit, Mr. Weasley all full of rightous fury, Ron and Draco going off, and harry's mind numbing realization of the actuality of rape. Poor Draco, learning that until that moment Harry hadn't completely believed him. Bet Harry feels bad NOW for ditching a vacation in the sun to go back to angst ridden London. *sticks out tongue at boys*
I'm dying to hear Arthur's excuse. And how could Ron have known and said NOTHING to Harry about it for all these years? He told Harry everything! Bastard.Update soon lovely :)
Loves!
Roo
I LIKE where you have them living. The little touches you invented were lovely. Absolutely lovely. Finding the hidden gift nearly broke me, because I do that all the time. The thought of my family finding little presents destined for them after I die made me run outside and hug my neighbor. Well, not literally. My neighbor is a creepy old man who likes my boobs. I tend to avoid him, actually. But I did call my daddy, so there's something.
Also, the scene in the hospital? Intense! Can just see the whole scene. Poor Mrs. Weasley all decrepit, Mr. Weasley all full of rightous fury, Ron and Draco going off, and harry's mind numbing realization of the actuality of rape. Poor Draco, learning that until that moment Harry hadn't completely believed him. Bet Harry feels bad NOW for ditching a vacation in the sun to go back to angst ridden London. *sticks out tongue at boys*
I'm dying to hear Arthur's excuse. And how could Ron have known and said NOTHING to Harry about it for all these years? He told Harry everything! Bastard.Update soon lovely :)
Loves!
Roo
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, so I read your reviews. You know I always do! I agree that Harry and Draco should have sex in the bed! It wouldn't have to be squicky. It could be beautiful - Harry mixing his past life with his present. Making a home for himself. Something like that. But right now their emotions are too fragile. Draco needs to break, and they can have angry desperate sex in the supply closet or something and save the lovemaking for when they are home again. *grin*