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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm... I'm not sure about the ending either, but I'm always looking for happy ones so I guess that's my fault rather than yours.
I like the overall structure of your story! I'd say that you could flesh it out a bit more, but generally a pretty good go!
Cheers,
Sabrina
I like the overall structure of your story! I'd say that you could flesh it out a bit more, but generally a pretty good go!
Cheers,
Sabrina