rate_review Reviews

this is one masterful oneshot. dark but romantic, sensual but innocent, mysterious but humorous. i really like it. wonderful vivid imagery, great character description, and an amazing plot to boot.
can i make a suggestion? a struggling-but-will-not-be-bought-by-money- draco and a millionaire-playboy-harry with the line: "I'm harry potter; i always get what i want." :)

I love the themes in this story! It's so ...seductive and dark yet, cute.=) I have one description!
Harry: rich, a prince looking for the perfect Queen/princess.
Draco: a slave who looks a lot like a girl. :)

Love it! I really hope you continue and I have inumerous amounts of ideas - too much to list here =D One i just thought up was, Draco gets dragged to a club by his "friends" in a ploy to get him bound and gagged but Harry interupts them as they try to drug/take Draco and saves him. Or Draco as a millionare that runs away from his family and gets a job in a cafe (or somewhere) and his boss likes him a little too much - enter Harry to save him. =D Really hope you continue even if you don't use the ideas.

wow i hope someone gives you a great description of what theyd like you to write.

Draco is a compulsive gambler, after being kicked out of all the respectable betting establishments, lost a bet in the wrong part of town.

I like your story, I am a huge fan of Dom!Harry and sub!Harry. There just isn't enough of these stories. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

Soooo need chapter 2! Draco - family shamed father trying to sale "virgin" Draco to seller?