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for The Witching Hour

by dreamer24

schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story, but the part where Snape puts on a MM t-shirt and a stud through his ear just really put me off., I'm sorry, the rest is great but that little feat just... doesnt fit in my opinion
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was great! lmao i love what you had them do to lucius
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Lucy is perfect. Now all that needs to be done is for Ron to face his family and for them to know what he tried to do and the consequences of his actions. Good Show!
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person neelix
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO....Lucy!!!!

How brilliant!!!!! Still loving this - keep going!
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really, really, enjoy this story. You are one hell of a writer!

I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooo that was great! i would love to see everyone's reaction to what Ron did
person Angie30
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoot Whoot! Excellent chapter, I love how Ron got is comeupance. He should really learn to read chapters throughly before using a spell, lol. I hope Lucius gets his in the end as well, the dirty bugger or should I say oily snake.
person Apryl
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"...he flew backwards ten feet." Ten Feet...*mild* violence, huh? **chuckle** About time! The asshole had it coming.
person Tenar10r
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved Snape slugging Ron!

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