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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow good idea. a demon is definitely unique(and brilliant.) i like the little thing about the muggle hand signal for holding a phone. little things like that make her character more honest and believable. i am eager to read more.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it that she 'owns' Voldemort's soul! (even if it is just an insignificant sliver of it)
That ought to make for interesting dealings with a demon/devil...whatever you wish to call it. I suspect Voldie is going to be pissed when he figures out that his soul is no longer his own.
You've definitely put a strange, but intriguing spin on this tale. I look forward to your next update.
That ought to make for interesting dealings with a demon/devil...whatever you wish to call it. I suspect Voldie is going to be pissed when he figures out that his soul is no longer his own.
You've definitely put a strange, but intriguing spin on this tale. I look forward to your next update.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this and the way it's written from Hermione in the first person, its different and very clever. I also like the premise of the story, interesting idea!!
Hope you are quick with the updates...!
Hope you are quick with the updates...!
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG - it's a good story! At least I love the first chapter...
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I don't know how constructive it is, but your characters a little overdone. Maybe you've done it on purpose, as in a parody. I really like the story so far, but, wonder where you're characters will end up with them all on this high octane character portrayal. I don't think you've got them wrong, just played to the hilt.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Laughed like a Slytherin at this line - '...a fragmented soul is still a soul, and this belongs to me. Ergo, I can sell it.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I know how it feels to have little to no reviews. This is a cleverly written story, keep it going!
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...Hermione's the one who will desert the trio instead of Ron. But her absence will have a greater impact than Ron's ever did. I like it! I can't wait to read more.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what are you planning? time travel? either way you've peeked my interest and i look forward to future installments of this story.