rate_review Reviews

great start its nice to See her taking charge, and not following those two bumbling fools into danger without a sensible plan. just be careful not to make Hermione to smart/powerful or she may come off as a little Mary sue. dot get me wrong i dint see this happening so far.
i cant whait to find out her plan

Hey this is a good story, waiting for the next chappie. :D

Unfortunately, the good fics never get reviewed. I find this one quite intriguing, as it's the first in a while for which I haven't a clue as to where it's headed. Overall, I like the voice you've created for Hermione, though personally I'd hear it a bit different, more voluble perhaps, but it's all perspective. Do you use a beta? Also, you might consider posting this on another archive, maybe Ashwinder or Petulant Poetess; readership is more dedicated there, and you get more useful feedback. Regardless, please continue, as I'm sure I'm not the only one liking this fic. Cheers!