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Looks like this is going to be interesting!! Bring it on!

I'm so glad to hear you picked up Jane Eyre! It is a little foreboding at first, it's quite long and the prose is tricky if you're not used to it, but it's truly fantastic. Hopefully you feel the same way! I myself have to reread it for school within the next few weeks, so like you, I have to find the time (and energy) for it! But Rochester is so delightfully like your Lucius, maybe it will inspire you further!

I liked this cute little chapter, poor (or not so poor!) Hermione, always letting her curiosity get the better of her! Silly chit should know better...but then I can't say I wouldn't have done the same thing, especially if there was a chance of Lucius "punishing" me!

As for Lucius in the shower...well that alone is a steamy enough thought for me to forgive you for no smut! But only just. :)

Take care and keep up the great work!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

You do great visuals, I can tell you that. That image of Lucius is gonna haunt me for a while. Eagerly awaiting more!

Chapter 5

I just love it! Your story is so much fun! And I want you to know, I haven

Chapter 6

ROFL! That cracks me up that LaBib suggested a clown suit. Yes I think that would irritate are imperious Lord Malfoy. :D

I am glad to see Hermione standing up to Lucius, otherwise I think he would walk all over her, buring her clothes, the nerve. LOL
I had to laugh at this line. Goddess, she was a bossy little thing. Yes that sounds like Lucius. I think that is why it

Chapter 7

Yes, Lucius definitely is trying to run Hermione

Ok, I have never really been a Lucius/Hermione fan, but I love this story. I read all of it tonight, because I just couldn't walk away. I hope you continue, I really would like to see how Lucius would handle having another kid. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Very well done...can't wait for the next chapter * slobber, slavers and just generally makes a mess til you get back here with more*