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Oh Lucius. He needs to stop and remember that Hermione is a Gryffindor....you know, the opposite of a Slytherin? lol Great update, I can't wait for more!

Her temper needs taken in hand???? Um, I think Lucius needs a lesson in real women! Hi there old man, we actually have brains! I'd say he needs taken in hand - I'm sure Hermione is the girl for that job *evil smirk* Please tell me I'm right... please?

Chapter 7: Oooh, your description of Lucius as he stood in the doorway to Hermione

Chapter 8: Oh my, did she do to him what I think she did? Hermione! I wouldn

T - You have to cut the URL for Hermione's dress at least in half. It is making the story so wide I can't read your chapter. Whenever someone puts an unbroken line of anything in a story, the print stretches that wide according to the techies for this site. I want to read the story. Can you fix the URL, pretty please? Many thanks in advance.

okay i have just caught up to where you are in the story. i love it!!!!!!!!! i love lucius being the domonering one and hermione takes it to some small degree but fights him the whole way. :) i am really looking froward to lots more of this story! i really really hope that you have lots and lots planned! i have one request, would you put either a bit more space or some kind of symoble to seperate the gaps or change of sences. (example it jumps from her night bath to the next day at work a paragraph below but i just keep thinking that it is more of the same sence and it takes me a minute and i read it twice, but i just thaught it might help--thanks.) :) i really am looking forward to the next chapter!!!! post soon!!! :)

This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Oh Hermione. Don't you know Lucius ALWAYS has the last say? lol Great update, I can't wait for more!!

Yup, I really like this story:-))

God, I 'm a sucker for Marriage Law fics, especially well written ones. This one starts with a bang. I can't wait to read more.