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for Hermione pays her Debt

by neelix

person Anon
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Muffy
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely. Thanks so much.
person Angie30
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic ending neelix!
person KellyJCR
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very sweet. I did love it. I am sad that you have run out of ideas. Lets hope that musre returns quickly. Thanks for the great story. Til next time.
person Muffy
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fluffly and lovely. Thanks for the update.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is great and you were right about reading The Price was Right before this one. Which I had anyway. But you did say that this was going to be a short story. Just out of curiosity, how long , I should ask, how many more chapters can we expect ? I do indeed love this one. Keep going. You're doing great. But I am curious as to length of it. (Just nosy., )
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was great. real happy for them.
person neelix
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, don't panic, it's not the end...yet.... I do have a wedding scene planned out and a little epilogue... its bnever the same without a mini Snape ot two running around.

You'll know when its finished - I'll write The End.

nee xxx

ps Thanks for reviewing guys, you're all so loyal. Mwhua xx
person KellyJCR
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short and sweet. That was a nice ending to The Price was right. Someone once said that happy endings are overated. I'm sure we agree that is a falsehood. Great job. As always looking forward to your next story.
person Angie30
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! What a lovely surprise, Severus is such a romantic. *Sighs* Where can I find a guy like that.

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