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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Your writting is excellent. The slow build of tension before their meeting. Now this chapter blows me away. It must have been difficult to write, but oh, so good.
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I think that Dumbledore was cruel treating Severus(Simon) and Harry the way he did all those years. I hope that Hermione can eventually figure out what spell was used on Severus(Simon) so that she can help him. I am glad that Severus(Simon) finally got revenge against Dumbledore by burning the protrait. I look forward to reading more.
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I love and evil Albus! This is so delicious!
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. Please don't make us wait for more. That was brilliant, Dumbledore and Snape exposed in one fell swoop.
I loved how you portrayed Dumbledore's craftiness and his willingness to sacrifice all for the cause. Truly a great chapter.
I loved how you portrayed Dumbledore's craftiness and his willingness to sacrifice all for the cause. Truly a great chapter.
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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are a certifiable genius. I love it. I absolutely love it. You've got a great sense of humor. Your characters are well flushed out and the story is such an easy read. I've sat here and read through all 19 chapters in one sitting. You have got to update soon and often. Did I mention I'm eating herb-crusted chicken for lunch? Alas, poor Yorick, I knew him well.
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So happy you're back, ladies! I have missed this story. I laughed at Severus trying to end things with Hermione - I think he is the chicken, not Yorick!
I hope he doesn't hex Hermione into the nether-world when he finds out she's seen his memories....because he WILL find out, one way or another.... it's a scary thought!
looking forward to the next installment!
I hope he doesn't hex Hermione into the nether-world when he finds out she's seen his memories....because he WILL find out, one way or another.... it's a scary thought!
looking forward to the next installment!
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so afraid he was going to send that first letter!. Whew.
Welcome back ladies!
Welcome back ladies!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm so glad for a new chapter! I hope things are going okay for you both now, or at least better. -TQW