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for At the Shore of The Heart

by neelix

schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad he left his date and came back to Hermione, so yes, you are right on track! :-) Although I do like angst, I have to admit that having enough of it in my own life these days leaves me with less fondness for it in stories. I love the story and will keep with it no matter what comes!!! :-)

Thanks for sharing!!
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NICE!!!!!
person emerson
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the use of the character Ines. We can't have Hermione taking on the role of rebound/physical release girl. Thanks for the update!
person Muffy
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely descriptions. I got a good feel. Thanks for the update.
person noeby
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeeeeeeek Ines???

lovely chapter. I felt like I was on hols on the med.

scrummy.

thanks love!
person KellyJCR
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was not ready for that. This story is killing me. Since when has Hermione sat idley by and not give any kind of insight to what her opinion is. Although I do see her point it is painful to watch all the same. I don't want to like Ines and I am slightly pissed at Severus, but we have to give him some slack due to circumstances and what not. I am bitting my nails as I wait for the next chapter.. Well done!!
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person noeby
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked that one. And intro'ing a new character who might even push things along, yes? LOL

thanks!
person KellyJCR
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't as bad as you might have thought. There was enough content to show where Severus is in his grieving process. I thought the description of the villa was lovely. I am oh so curious of what is going to happen now that Ines has pointed out to Herione that there are feelings other than frienship for Severus. Well done can't wait for more.

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