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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg that is so sad. i lost my dad not that long ago so i know what severus is going through. you feel so lost, (well i did), i had such a huge hole in me (thats what it felt like). i sat beside his bed as he took his last breath, and i am glad i did, it gave me the sence that it wes real.
Foofie
Foofie
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was beautifully written, neelix. Just lovely.
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do enjoy your stories. I look forward to reading more as you have time. Thanks.
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a heartbreaking story neelix. Poor Severus.
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG how could you, you little tease, I thought you were going to kill severus. Naughty for decieving us like that... Cant wait for more!
Anya
Anya
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Sorry if you're not in a cheery mood, though.
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Snape really is in love with his wife. It's sad that it will end so tragically though. God (or whatever diety controls destiny) certainly doesn't like to cut Snape a break.
I liked that you explained a little more about how he came to know his wife and what he's been doing for the past few years.
I can't wait to see where you will take this next.
MHS
I liked that you explained a little more about how he came to know his wife and what he's been doing for the past few years.
I can't wait to see where you will take this next.
MHS
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh heck,who cares what you're in the mood for. A good tear-jerker never hurt anyone. Good start.
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. please please update soon ... later for now
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