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for Pains and Contradictions

by padme82

person Sophie
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Really... just, wow. This is fantastic, please write more.
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i didn't read the other chapters yet, but will after this. requiem was a good, or seemed real to me and everyone who has lost a beloved one can relate to every character you wrote about, to every moment.
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved 'dune'! i read all books including the two encyclopedias! how miraculous that i stumble over this chapter!

ok, so now i MUST stop reading! otherwise i will sit at my desk until dawn!
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh gawd, you have me hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for the update.
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really really hope this has a happy ending cause if it ends in angst I'm gonna drown myself crying... your a really good author to be able to do that. please write more and i will love you forever!!!!!... that sounded kinda stalkerish didn't it? sorry bout that
person Emily
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. I hate you.. and I love you. >.> Is that weird?

That's a terrible way to end a chapter! D: D: D: You may have to post the next chapter very, very soon or I may die with curiosity.

My life is in your hands!

-Emily
person puck
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was late picking my dad up from the airport because I was so engrossed with this story. Well done. Very well written. I can't wait to read what's next! Please add me to any update list you've got! Thank you!
person Emily
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is excellent so far.

I thought you should know that I cried like a baby during this chapter. ;-; It was really moving, especially the poem that Hermione read.

I know that I spotted a few mistakes, but I can't remember them for the life of me. Maybe I'll review again later if I see them again.

I really love your writing style. Great job.

-Emily
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh wow wonderfully long update.

My heart is all fluttery from then end. THAT, Severus, is what you get for leaving the bond unmatured... *has a bit of a sniff*

The descriptions of Severus' despair when Harry finally gives up were beautifully written.

Thanks for such a great update, can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Crossing my fingers that somehow Harry has a soft landing... xx
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy crap! NOOOO not this massive cliffie! GAH! I'm gonna go mad! Nuuuu HARRY!!!! evil evil evil cliffie!!!

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