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for Pains and Contradictions

by padme82

person Seacilin
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this fic.
It played on my emotions, like the stings of a harp.
I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Encore!
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D

Great chapter!!! Keep up the excellent work!
(I wonder what Draco has to say to Snape? ^^)
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story hope to see an update soon.
person anniea
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! yeah that's about it. so harry was polyjuiced to look like Remus and Remus was polyjuiced to look like Severus? okay please update soon hun *kisses*
person kunitsu
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter, you really know Severus. I wonder how long till Severus and Harry get into a relationship. I am looking forward to see how that will go
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. I loved the depth in which you went into the characters; their loss, their guilt, their compassion, everything. This is a beautiful story and I am glad I got the privilege of reading it.


Keep up the fantastic work. And yes, you did a beautiful job with the funeral.
person Solomon
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I misunderstood what this story was supposed to be about I have always spoke english but I misunderstood
person Lisa
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thats all i can really say.
You have a gift, a beautiful gift that allows you to write such a beautiful and emotional funeral scene.
It is rare for a funeral scene in a fic to make me cry, but this one had tears streaming so fast that i had to use buckets before i slipped on it.
what you had Harry comment on about women in mourning was absolutely correct, and i agree with that assertion.
The character portrayals were exactly right and the art with which you used the polyjuice potion to allow Harry to attend the funeral was simply used to a powerful extent.
I have nothing but praise for this fic and especially this chapter and i eagerly await the next installment provided i can stop crying in time.
Bravo!
person kunitsu
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a heart renching chapter. I am happy no one actually blamed Harry for Rons death. It was nice to see some emotions on Severus's face even though it wasnt really him
person Akaneikeda
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. Have been crying through the whole funeral scene. Moreover the "holding-hands" chapter was sweet as hell...

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