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I'm so glad that Harry told Dumbldore off and stood up to Mrs. Weasley. Thanks for the update.

Hermione is never going to give birth herself. LMAO - no better discription what a birth could do to an on-looker ever was made! *laughs*

Even if I love depressed subdued Harry I love him defending his unborn child against everyone even more! And you were really nasty to poor Claudia, to gave her Snapes nose - how could you!!!

Can't wait for the next (unfortunately last) chapter - and thanks for the update notice, btw.

Good Lord that men is an idiot! You would think he would at least ask! Oh well I guess we can not change the man's nature. I know this story is already written but; is there a chance that somebody punch Severus in the mauth? His behavior is apalling.


I understand why Harry lost his mind after hearing Molly talking about taking the baby. While 17 is not the best age to have a baby he is not by any means a child anymore and how selective of them to think that he was old enough to be a marthyr but not old enough to care for his child. He really needs to stay away from them, maybe he should make sure Claudia does not go to Hogwarts.


I can't wait to see how much more punishment you deal next chapter.

(Chapter 3)

Well, I'm glad that Harry stood up to Dumbledore and to Molly, and everyone else, but honestly, he and Severus are both being immature about not confronting one another. I'm glad to see you resolved it somewhat towards the end. Hopefully in the next chapter they will both confess to one another--Harry will tell Severus why he ran away, and Severus will tell Harry of his mistaken belief that he was with Ron. I was glad when Harry told Hermione to drop it when she was gunning to discuss his pregnancy (NOT a Hermione fan!), and I was glad that Harry showed some restraint and some spark when Severus finally came to see little Claudia, and didn't break down and turn all tearful and girly.

Your writing style is strangely addicting, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

One more chapter to go! I'm so excited. I can't wait for Harry and Severus to finally reconcile and make a beautiful little family together :)

When is part three coming out this is really good!

al can say is iwant more does sev realized that he needsharry i hope that harry is saved and and maybe forgives sev but makes him sufffer please oh please update soon want more

Wow, that was cool, seeing the story from Sev's POV.

Hello.

I ususally don't review on the stories I read, for the simple reason that I don't have the time. But when I read this story I felt compelled too. No other fiction, story, movie or anything in the catagory, has moved me the way this one did. It reached out and touched me in a way that I never though was possible.
Though I have to be honest and say that the way you wrote this story, in present form, bothered me a bit, I dunno why, but you are the first person I've seen that can pull it off like this. The way you described Harry's pain...I don't think I've shed that many tears in years, if ever.
When I read the second part, the part with Snape poit of view, my stomach ached and I felt slighly sick. But not in a bad, repulsed sense of sickness. I felt sick beacause I could feel his pain so strongly. The story itself felt so real.

I'll be looking forward to your next update, and thank you for this amazing story.
Love, Loony

Damn those two really are stubborn until the end, they wont even confront each other. Its like they are used to getting hurt and know that they can do nothing about it so they just let it be. This chapter was really good, it was nice to see it from Severus's point of view