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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you started it out. I really cannot wait to see how this plays out. I was a bit put out when Draco was uncharacteristically naive and blindly chose to take his mother place. I understand the family ties though, so it worked out well for your story. Like I said I am eager to see what happens next. so... update soon!?!
S Hazel
S Hazel
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is actually good. You write well.
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Draco,...but this story is fabulous! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has a lot of potential. I hope you update soon!
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hurry and write more!! I love it!
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the first 2 chapters. Remind me of memoirs of a geisha in a way. Please cont soon. I promise to review everytime you update lol.