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April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned before how awesome this story is? Probably, but I'm saying it again! :D
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is flipping brilliant! i am consuming them like a parched person guzzles water! i love every single chapter and can't wait to go back and reread the whole thing once its done so i can put all the pieces together. i commend you on a complex plot that's still easily understood and for the slow build of their complex emotional relationship ... you're setting a great foundation for whatever will come next! thanks!
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter!!! Huge suspense and love the relationship between hermione and draco.... update soon
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting plot/mystery! It's so different than many other run-of-the-mill stories out there, which is why I get so excited when it's updated. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what a jam packed and action filled chapter...I'm completely entranced....
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whew, that was an exciting adventure. Guess we won't find out till the next chapter if Draco made it to safety or not.
Also, I like how you're taking your time building the eventual falling-in-love part, and how the story is told from Hermione's POV so that we don't always know what Draco is thinking, either. Nice work.
Also, I like how you're taking your time building the eventual falling-in-love part, and how the story is told from Hermione's POV so that we don't always know what Draco is thinking, either. Nice work.
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March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am more and more impressed the longer this story goes on. Great work!
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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just found this and can't wait for more. Interesting and vivid.
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March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fun chapter - well done with this. Lots of humor and banter; nice bit of chemistry going on betwen the protgonists.
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March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nicely atmospheric descriptions. Credilble characterisations. The 'mission' is an intriguing one; I particularly liked the argument between Draco and Hermione... Good job!