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Ooh, interesting. Hermione is quite out of character, but I assume that's due in fact to the spell from the book.
Update soon!

I like this one, what a neat way to look at it. I hope you post again soon! ~M

I LOVE THIS!!! Great plot, can't wait for more!!!

I like it. Please update soon.

I like it. Please update soon.

That was a very good assessment of Snape's character, very insightful and well thought out.

Just as a sort of mental exercise, are you going to have Severus use the spell on a Dark revel so all the Death Eaters can see what Ol' Moldy Shorts is really like?

I've enjoyed what I read so far. I 'm wondering about the spell and the potion. It seems to be a way to see physically what people hide from others. Snape's manifestation is interesting, and I wonder, if anyone had done the spell if they would see him in the same light.

It's an intriguing concept and I can't wait to read more.

fun fun fun

Love the new chapter, Chapter 4. Glad i could help, and i completely understand the rush to get a chapter up and running before going to work and the like. There's bound to be typos or mistakes that we ourselves can't see as we write. I immediatly noticed the changes in the fourth chapter, and i enjoyed it very much. You've captured Severus quite well, so well done. The new chapter explains a lot. The door left open in his distraction, Hermiones' looks and the sudden kiss. I was worried there for a moment at the end of chapter 3 that suddenly they'd end up fondling and falling into bed, or whatever people have in mind when they make these scenes. I'm glad you didn't and i like how Severus allowed it simply because she was out of sorts.

Keep it up :)

Wolf