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Ok, eww, not a fan in any way of incest. And Lucius should have been killed, he obviously brainwashed Draco into thinking it was okay. Not saying your story is bad, but it was good up until the incest scene.

Ah! I wasn't expecting that!!! You have to admit Lucius and Draco are hot together :P But that was a cool twist, using Harry's weakness to care as his downfall, it's actually a really great idea. It was just rushed to me. You could have taken your time with something like this. But I suppose it works as a quick one-shot. Good work!

What the shit? here I was all upset for Draco and then that happens. Lol. Well now I'm pissed for believing him