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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Just the idea of Hermione defending Severus' virtue in a pub, and then him laughing it off with Remus; just great.
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations, my dear Cliobella!
You managed to capture a Severus Snape that any woman would want to bathe with! Not that we wouldn't all take that plunge most willingly at the drop of a wand, anyway.
You achieved the perfect balance of elegant erotica, without resorting to base vulgarity----which is a marvellous talent, indeed.
Brava, my dear, brava! I truly loved both chapters of "Mine", and am simply awestruck by your imaginative one~shot. I hesitate to call it PWP, as its quality is so far above the usual fare called by that term.
I would sincerely enjoy reading more of your work. Continue writing, please!
Victoria Prince, fellow author
You managed to capture a Severus Snape that any woman would want to bathe with! Not that we wouldn't all take that plunge most willingly at the drop of a wand, anyway.
You achieved the perfect balance of elegant erotica, without resorting to base vulgarity----which is a marvellous talent, indeed.
Brava, my dear, brava! I truly loved both chapters of "Mine", and am simply awestruck by your imaginative one~shot. I hesitate to call it PWP, as its quality is so far above the usual fare called by that term.
I would sincerely enjoy reading more of your work. Continue writing, please!
Victoria Prince, fellow author
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Gasps* Absolutely wonderful!
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Thanks!
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh good grief... how hot was that!
I want to be in the tub with Severus..... sigh!
A little more would be lovely!
I want to be in the tub with Severus..... sigh!
A little more would be lovely!
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dont feel bad, Luv. Oneshots have a way of taking on a life of their own....trust me, I know, only for me it is usually my Lucius oneshots that turn into lengthy collections of smut LOL......it was very sweet, lovely in fact! Of course, I love Severus....i especially love him naked....naked AND wet....well thats just pure decadence and the only thing I can say about that is MORE please!
Happy Writing!
S_G
Happy Writing!
S_G
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah that was hot. Thanks for the pick me up! lol
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, thank goodness you're not a canon nazi!! Lovely story, very romantic and sexy (you asked in your 1st chapter A/N "who in their right mind would kill Snape?" Amen, AND who in their right mind would pair Hermione to Ronald Weasley?? Just don't get it.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic. I love it when plots take you over like that--you can tell just by reading. :o)
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You can design my bathroom anytime--I don't know if I was breathing harder from the sex or the plumbing!