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I love that movie! No joke, I can always watch it and laugh my arse off every time. Great update. I'm so nervous for Lucius, and for Hermione. Gah! More please!

Wow. That was intense. I'm glad that she's forgiven him. I wonder what's with the note from dear ol'dad. If Lucius is frightened, then I think I may have an idea. Great update, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh my god! He's making him take the mark, isn't he? I know I already said that in the last review but: poor Lucius! Goodness, he needs her so much. I only hope she understands that!

Thank you for that lovely update. I feel so bad for Lucius. Beeing madly in Love with a girl who ignrores him, and now that!

Why are all the best actors English? Simple, you said so yourself! Yanks go ga-ga for the British accent - and Hollywood happens to be over the atlantic in the USA! lol!

There's NOTHING wrong with Snape! Its just that my version of him has a tan, short hair and Neville's temperament! lol!

Thing is, Lucius is supposed to be a gentleman - and a gentleman has manners! Mudblood is like a very violent expletive, and he throws it about a heck of a lot! To say he's probably had 'male finishing school' lessons, his use of such language is really not appropriate to his social standing... not to mention swearing in front of a lady and a child!! He should know what he's done through that alone!

Plus, the way he treats witches is also awful and very bad manners! The love-em-and-leave-em attitude would probably have his Mother spinning in her grave! That's atrocious behaviour - he's not a gentleman, he's a playboy - and I have no time for playboys!

Grovelling is a good tactic.

OMG! What was in that letter to have him break down! Or is it the stress of the past three weeks that's caused it?

Why do I have the impression that those tears have been a long time coming? Poor bloke needed a good cry! We ladies know that a good cry can solve a lot of problems (or at least take the edge off them) - but fellas will bottle it up until they explode like a hydroelectric damn with a hairline crack! I wonder if the last time Lucius was hugged was before his Mother died?

Sometimes it looks like I'm doing a psychology degree! lol!

This was a great chapter. I am glad that Lucius and Hermione are speaking again. I look forward to reading more to see what the letter contained. I think, since it was from his father, that it might have something to do with taking the dark mark.

Dear Author,

I like your story, I like the way you portrayed Lucius, even though he is a bit OoC I think. Though we wouldn't know, since we never really knew what he was like at Hogwarts ;) Except arrogant of course!

I also like your writing style, though there are some points which could be improved. I never liked parts as this "He's Lucius Malfoy, arrogant git, I shouldn't fall for him!" You know, the parts where they talk to themselves, it doesn't appear naturally.

I do hope for an update soon. Keep up the good work!

he got a letter telling him tat he's going to be a death eater.. is it?

damn.. i was hoping tat owl died on the way sending the letter... lol.. :p

Spent about 8 months eating nothing but Ramen helping missionaries in Mexico. The stuff gives me nightmares. I'll send bacon instead O.o
Liked chapter 9 =) wondering what the heck the letter said!
"Curiosity killed the cat...
Satisfaction brought it back"

OMG!! It's something to do with Voldie isn't it? BAD BAD TOMMY!!!

Ok I hate Abraxas even more now, hes obviously upset my Luci!!

Wow what a chapter, it shows Lucius' human side for him to go to pieces over Hermione's treatment, I don't think he's ever had that before. Poor Lucius.

I hope it's not Voldie I really don't....*Looks around and finds Tommy twirling his wand and looking devious* "What have you done?!" Tommy smirks and looks away.... "Nothing dear...Really...Would I do anything to dear Lucius?" .... That man is such a pariah!!!

I loved this chapter!

Update again soon!

~LadyVoldemort87~

omg =D

i read 4 chapters in a row today! that is soo cool :D love ya ! xD :D

wow hermione was a lil hysteric but its understandable =)

i like it, things r looking up :D

update soon!