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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
brilliant plot idea.
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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very different. Always love Harry & Severus together.
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so first off I loved it. I wish there was more than just this. It would make a wonderful chapter fic. I'd like to know more about the setting too... it was really interesting.
Also, I think it should be sorted under AU. There is a section for that.
Anyway. Loved it.
Also, I think it should be sorted under AU. There is a section for that.
Anyway. Loved it.
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It would be so nice to see more in this world. It was a wondreful story to read, but *begs*
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I wish this wasn't a one-shot! You've left so much hope for them. I'd love to see if they truly make it to live a life of freedom!
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
then i shall wait but not too long. i really want to finish this its good and completely original.
i love this
SDL
i love this
SDL
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this! It was really enjoyable to read. I would be wonderful to have a background story, such as how they got Harry as a baby and what kinds of test/experiments and improvements/enhancements they did to the people in their lab. I know you probably didn't want to make this into a who big chaptered story and I can't remember if you had labeled it as a one-shot. Anyway, good luck and happy writing! ^.^
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This reminds me of Dark Angel and Pretender. Very nicely written. :-)
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i understand you are writing another story why not write that one first then come back to this one i think it would make a good story
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quite good actually.