rate_review Reviews

lol. i love how draco and harry keep each other on their toes. not to mention that last part was some how dead sexy. more so than before. maybe its because i just saw a picture of tom felton but for whatever reason it was

I like how Narcissa is giving Harry some motherly affections.

Love this and the companion story. I've read both through, but now I'm rereading them at the same time so I get both sides of each scene. Keep up the great work!

Thanks for updating no need to apologize. I have been waiting eagerly and I love the new chapter. How can I blame you for not updating fast enough when I can't find the time to do simple things in my life, let alone write pages worth of fascinating stories.
Sara
p.s. I love this whole story please update again soon. ^_^

Soooo need chapter 19!!!

Sooo need chapter 18!!!

Thank you for the promise of regular updates. I'm sure you must be busy with all the stories you write. They're all wonderful by the way. Thanks for another fantastic chapter. (I would have reviewed sooner, but I was computerless for awhile)
Sara

I know this'll sound weird, but it was strange reading this chapter without all the spacings. Not sure why I'm commenting on that. lol Anyways, I do love your Narcissa. The scene with Lucius was beautiful.

Her later encounter with Harry confused me a bit, however. She had seen that Harry was using the chair for balance, right? Is that why she was unhappy, that he was showing so plainly his need for support? I thought that would be something she would want, inside the walls of Malfoy Manor? Or was Harry not using it so much for regular balance, as he was using it for balance because of the headaches?

As for the headache curse, since she took it into herself and did not vanish it, will any headaches affect her because of it? It was amusing to read her thoughts on Harry being not stupid or not unintelligent just in the way it seems you have to work from the ground up with the Malfoys. Afterall, they hardly trust anyone, and could only do so with the real act of sacrifice.

If possible, I think I appreciated even more Narcissa's thanks to Lily in her perspective. I can't be sure, but I think this was the first time [Bloody] I had ever heard anyone show gratitude to Lily and I really enjoy how it was handled here. I really like seeing how Narcissa genuinely likes Harry, and enjoys being able to be a mother to him. Wonderful job with this chapter. ^^ Happy Thanksgiving/November. ^^

I really enjoyed this chapter. It put Narcissa in a very different light and made her much more human and motherly...i really like that side of her.

its nice that narcissa can mother harry without being smothering and its nice that harry can accept that