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for The Scientist

by neelix

person nastygrl
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh good God woman! MORE MORE MORE!!!!!
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I say keep going... that's pretty much what I'd advocate, regardless of my own apparent six month writing sabbatical.
person Angie30
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I am glad that you decided to continue it to this point; it is absolutely lovely.

-luvsev
person nastygrl
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I just adore how you can put me right in the middle of the room with your characters. I don't feel as if I'm looking through the window into their lives, I feel like I am right there with them, seeing and feeling along with them. Thanks for another great read!
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an absolutely fantastic piece of writing! I loved it.
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Adorable. I can see someone as socially isolated as Snape needing a great deal of advice on how to proceed; it's been years since he was interested in a woman, after all. You have a nice touch with characterizations, I hope you continue to write.
person wudelfin
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a romantic
person noeby
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah, that was lovely! The build up was delightful. And him reading her like a book -- v funny. A really nice piece of writing. On to part 2!
person noeby
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so this doesnt have to be the end, you know. One more might tie it up nicely? Loved his pov. Always good. thank you, dear!

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