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September 26, 2020 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best erotic fanfiction stories I have read! Truly an amazing piece of work from each possible perspective, love, thriller, drama, erotica, simply amazing! It is not finished though and that is really a pity. I know it has been so long time ago, but cannot help but hope that the author might go back to it which is why I am writing this review. Thanks to the author for this amazing literary work!
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February 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM
My the story is so well written besides some editing mistakes. I hope that you finish the story. I know there is more to be written down. I hope your muse has not left you. I really enjoyed the story. I hope you are doing well
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September 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Did you ever finish it??
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June 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this!
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April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ok seriously please keep writing I'm incredibly invested in these characters and this story and by god please let Hermoine and Draco make it through alive and live happily ever after.
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June 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Only just happened across this story recently but have loved reading it. Good twists to the storyline and believable within the canon character traites. Very disappointed that I now see it hasn't been updated since 2012 as I would very much like to continue reading and see how the author resolves the story.
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April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really wanted to read this story, but there are so many typo's and misspelled words which was distracting for me and made it difficult for me to focus on the story. My suggestion is that you get a beta who can read over your chapters and find any mistakes or might I even suggest that you re-read your chapters before posting them. Good luck on writing and hope you get a lot of good reviews.
-Enchanted Fairy
-Enchanted Fairy
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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please please please finish the story! I'm soooo addicted to it! If you needed someone to help you review this I'm good with grammar and I'd be more than willing to. Please let me know and finish the story! :D
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September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pleaseeeeeeeeee update <3
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August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey update please!!!