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for You Really Got A Hold On Me

by soldiersgirl0709

person carha
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a cute little oneshot. You can't deny Lucius when he is knocking on your door. (I know I never would)Great job hun, looking forward to your next piece.

and a quick question, do you plan to do anything more with Girl Talk? I hope so!
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My husband doesn't stand a chance next time it rains.

Great story - as always. Love how you ended it - having to shut her up. Also, the part with Lavender being po'ed at Ron for knowing of Hermione's "lack of virginity" was hilarious.
As always, I appreciate your sense of humor.

Next??????
person Larrabee
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your one-shots. What a way to hold us over until a full FF.

You have a real talent. The way you can create such chemistry between different characters, and the way you create such realistic chracterizations of said characters. I love it.

I can't wait for more of your stories. I have read them all... several times, in fact. And I have read all of Ms_Figg's, so I pretty much have nothing to do...

I mean, except, study for L-SATs, finish my thesis, and work. lol.

All the best, to you and yours, as always,
Elaine
person Angelbaby
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Funny I have the same problem with Lucius and Severus popping up naked infront of me, they seem to take turns. Well this was a lovely little piece, Lucius in all his glory and something about a no no place...........anywho I want to encourage you to keep going on your next Severus piece 'cause you know he's my favourite. My favourite Sevvy of your writing is from 'The Bond'. I hope this one is a little bit sweet 'cause he's extra yummy when he's like that. Happy writing Babe...Hugs
person Utopia
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Isn't a PDA one of those hand-held computery-things??

Invested? Investments are worthless in the current financial mess! lol!

no-no place? That's a new one on me! lol.

Ooooh, daring a Gryff! She'll take the bait with that!

Ooooooooooh, be still my beating heart! Oh oh oh! Dirty dancing type dancing! Like when Baby takes in the water melon! *swoons into puddle of goo*

In the middle of a maze? Well, that's a first one for me! I've not read that before!

Awwwww! Can't I claim a bit of lack of focussing here? I tried really hard with my little ficlets for you!

person Mia
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius keeps "popping up"? Naked? That settles it, I'm moving in with you. Definately sounds like a good time to be had. Not a bad way to be harrassed I think. I really enjoyed this bit. It was tasty and tingly and ... well, it made my no no parts feel happy. Thanks for the fun love.

~Mia~ prissiepup@hotmail.com. (Should you feel inclined. Don't feel obligated please. But I know what it's like to want to say something back, and not be able to.)
person Lexi
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i, for one, am incredibly happy that naked lucius keeps taking over your mind. :)
this story is just... woo!
i need a cold shower.
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes I can see how hard it must be for you to have to deal with a naked Lucius just showing up. It's a shame really. Must be torture. lol Great one shot! I loved it!
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes I'm waiting for you Draco!! LOL

Wow, this was a brilliant one shot, filled with sexiness, and you gotta love a blushing Weasley LOL

The no no place...ROFL! It will be forever associated with you now LOL

Fantastic as usual, I loved it!

Snuggles!

Vic x
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, as always, but the boyfriend is 300 miles away and it's raining right now. (serious pouting) I hate cold showers.

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