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for Never Too Much

by Rettavex

person quietlee
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories.
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Only one more chapter??? You can't do that woman!! I need much much more...besides, you have to show us how they develop and stuff...cough cough...Lovely update, I love the interaction and the raw need and power Harry radiates towards Luna while still showing love to Severus. This must be surreal for all of them, yet it seems so natural and like a long time coming as well. More!
person Fairner
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Takes a sip of tea*
That was hot. The chapter I mean.
*smiles*
person qwerty
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* That was hott!
Only one more chapter *cries* But this is such a great sequel!
I love the depth of emotions in all your characters - it makes it so real (as fantasy can get I suppose)
Awesome job!
person anon
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Nice touch that she prepared.
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo. How do you do this? How do you continually write HOT, sexy chapters with hardly any sex? That was so f*cking HOT!! Maybe it's your attention to detail, emotions, mood, and UST but it works on so many different levels for me. Luna is a lucky lucky woman...and I'm so glad you had her kneel before Sev, not only was that beautifully sweet and appropriate, but it was HOT as hell..apparently Harry thought so too. Please, you can't stop after one more chapter, you must continue!
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will not offer threats to your person, but instead, my deep appreciation for the emotional depth you offer in this story. Too often the threesome category is plain smut, and there is nothing wrong with that, but I sometimes need more than that, and your story delivers by the bucketful! Many thanks and I will anxiously wait for the next chapter.
person Coldfire3
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good but short make the next one longer it should be a lot of fun to write if it does not come out very quickly I will be looking you up and casting a jinx on you that will be very uncomfortable. I'm a very impatient reader when it comes down to it.
person Ann
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done.
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really really hope that Luna accepts Harry's offer to become part of the triad. I think she would add some much needed feminity to that family of boys! Go Luna!!

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