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Fascinating. It's like walking on egg shells to have a conversation with Lucius while is is feeling so stressed.

please continue this is torture not knowing

This was great. I hope that Hermione and Lucius can continue to talk to each other and start being able to act like a married couple should. Patiently waiting to read more.

Oh my!! I knew Mr.Malfoy would come back, but he will destroy sweet gentle Lucius' chances with the girl! I want them to be happey! Maybe Hermione will learn how to Merge the two personalities in one, good for her delishious man?

I loved how gentle she was to him, though....

And Flyffers is saying he has wroted to you! and that there's a fresh veela update!!! He waits dfor your email...

:O
Lucius seems so scared of Mr Malfoy :O

but yeah we know how he can be so they'd better be careful with him :P

Is there some form of Occlumency that might have a therapeutic use? I realize that Mr. Malfoy was the split that formed to protect Lucius from what needed to be done in his life and probably occured when she left; the split is no longer needed and has now become a danger to them both. Which one is the money-genius, by the way?

so its Mr Malfoy and Lucius now :O

mmm well Im glad Lucius is winning for now :P lol

okay that makes much more sense to me! i did go back and skim through the chapters and things make a lot more sense and i do hope that she can do him so real good so that he can get his mind back in his control which is hard. i know i have some family who have something very similar to this. i look forward to see what hermione does for her man. :)

I like the changes. :) Don't worry about having to go back and change things, we all have to make edits sometimes!

So, I understand apologizing for the inconvenience of having to go back and skim chapters 4-14. But I think you go too far when you call yourself a bad writer. There's nothing wrong with having to go back and make edits and changes; especially if the changes add more depth to a character. I know you probably didn't mean it seriously, but if you were a bad writer, then I wouldn't still be reading these stories. So please don't refer to yourself that way, even if you don't mean it seriously. Because going back and skimming a few chapters of a good story is no hardship to a reader.