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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. I like how you've made Severus so concerned and caring for her, and yet have him be a bit awkward with that fact. It makes it more believable for me. I hope you're not going to make him faint in delivery? It's funny, but a little overdone.
person smmz79
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG i just loved this chap... severus is so cute i love a worried severus because he is generally so calm and in control or at least that is the vibe he gives off... wow great job
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I bow my head in awe and respect:-) The couples shower was brilliant, and more than one man would be shocked to know just exactly what women talks about:-))
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHhhh ha ha ha ha ha ha, that's hilarious. I've never heard of a couple's shower. Eh, but my friends don't have kids yet and are only NOW starting to get married. So I suppose eventually...
Good chapter :o)
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Foolish wand waving. Oh my god what an image to leave those girls with. Poor Padma or was it Parvati Goren isn't so good. I love the men's reaction to the whole party. Very man-cavey. (That's my new phrase. I learned it one an internet site last night... will it blend.com.)

The story about Snape's grudging admiration of the Weasley twins fart potion on the Mandrakes was hilarious. I always suspected Snape admired them more than he admitted.

It was a treat.
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahahaha ! that was fantastic!
that was to good!
person Ink
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahahahahahahahah so good!
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Try baby oil to get rid of the tattoo-worked on mine. AS for the story: LOL! Sounds exactly like my brother-in-law at theirs.
person Muffy
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been to a few couples showers before. They weren't that awkward, kind of fun actually (might be a Canadian thing :D).

Fun chapter. I think you did all the men justice. Severus must have been somewhat pleased as well as mortified. Thanks for the update.
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.

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