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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! The ending brought a sweet smile to my face.
You might want to read through the story again though, there were a few simple typos.
Peace,
Yellow Moon
You might want to read through the story again though, there were a few simple typos.
Peace,
Yellow Moon
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! Thank you so much for sharing!!!
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! It was well written and very enjoyable. Good work and I hope to read more of your work in the future.