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by soldiersgirl0709

person Anon
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sheedy - that was so sad and sweet. I guess death really isn't the end after all. :)

Bubblegumdego - LOL It's been a while since I read a sex scene that was written so poetically when it came to describing the details of the act. Loved it. And a very sexy story indeed. I especially loved his puppy dog look of disappointment when he thought she'd just gone ahead and had sex with a random stranger. LOL
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sheedy- Interesting. I like the ending. Too bad our favorite bad boy was dead though. Keep up the good work and I hope to read one of your stories in the future.
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was sad. It made me cry lol
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lexy: That was wonderful! I love stories where the male lead is a ghost....some of my favorite romance novels have involved a ghost LOL, that sounds odd doesnt it? Anyhow, I loved it!!!


Sheedy: So sweet, so sad.



Thanks for contributing guys!!!
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugggg. That for some reason was soo unbearably sad to me. Maybe it was because they were older, or the way you had Hermione writing the letter...*SIGH*... I need to go chase my kid around for a while now. Nice little one shot.
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sheedy~

very sad, but i like how he is still there, watching over them! Very well written!!


Lady B*
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lexy- That was fantastic! I loved it. True, I'm partial to a happy ending, but you can't always get what you want. I am still dabbing the tears away. Excellent writing and I hope to read more of your stories in the future.
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy shit that is creepy lol
person SynneR
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww that 3rd one made me wanna cry a little, though I do agree...it is kind of creepy XD
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent twist, Lexi, and so bittersweet. I wondered if she would be pregnant and then I wondered if we'd be able to see said baby at birth - ah the wonders of fiction. Lovely piece of writing. :)

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