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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Severus and Harry? How? Why did they part? Soooo need chapter 8!!! What will Narcissa tell him?
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7! Draco you are an idiot! The picture was taken from inside the house!!!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more s'mores! please *smiles*
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6!!! Pansy took a photo?
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What is Pansy up to? Is she behind this? Sooo need chapter 4!!!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Wow... sounds really good so far! My only teeny tiny suggestion would be to put an extra space between each paragraph because at the moment it's like a big block of text which is a little harder to read...
Other than that, great work! Can't wait to see more!
Stef
Wow... sounds really good so far! My only teeny tiny suggestion would be to put an extra space between each paragraph because at the moment it's like a big block of text which is a little harder to read...
Other than that, great work! Can't wait to see more!
Stef
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pansy and Blaise? Blaise plans to kill Draco and Scorpius? Why kill the Malfoy heir? Doesn't she care for her son? Why doesn't she just leave Draco? Sooo need chapter 5!!!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo soooo soooo need chapter 3!!!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved it and would love more, please!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*munches happily on s'more*
Hey again! Looks good! Very easy to read now!
Sounds even better too! Poor Draco's daughter! Scorpius *giggles at the name* can run but she can't?! Die Pansy die!
Can't wait for more!
Stef
Hey again! Looks good! Very easy to read now!
Sounds even better too! Poor Draco's daughter! Scorpius *giggles at the name* can run but she can't?! Die Pansy die!
Can't wait for more!
Stef