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for Macushla

by neelix

schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi there, i loved your story, but i'm mainly posting to explain why i removed your review, i did not take it the wrong way and if you'll notice my most current fic, still in progress, I did indeed take your advice and the advice of several others and began spacing. I remove all the reviews that give advice or criticism, after i read them of course because I want to leave the reviews of the story itself up for everyone.
I apologize if you felt ignored, trust me you were not, I actually removed a few reviews once I make note of them. Thank you again for taking the time to review my writing and again I'm sorry if you felt i was insulting you, i wasnt.
angela
person noeby
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely. It was very moving. As always, you write beautifully.
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story made me smile at the end. It was so beautiful. :D
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, just lovely. It didn't need anything else cos it was just perfect. Awesome song as well. I feel all warm and fuzzy now!
person Terrie
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always, your stories are well written. This is a nice short story which I enjoyed very much. It was quick, got the emotion across but left all the details to my imagination. It shows your versatility as a well crafted short story can be much harder to write than a long one. Thank you.

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