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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brava! Well-done, my dear. I truly enjoyed this little one-shot of yours. Written from Severus' perspective was a bonus; most SS/HG's center around Hermione's POV, and it was definitely a nice change of pace to finally read a well-written tale from the beloved Potions Master's side of the coin.
Please say that you'll write another story soon. You are talented with a quill, your vocabulary and spelling are above par, and you managed to "hit a nerve" with the direction that you took Severus . . . I absolutely loved it! (she snivels with a romantic gleam in her eyes)
Most sincerely,
Victoria Prince
Please say that you'll write another story soon. You are talented with a quill, your vocabulary and spelling are above par, and you managed to "hit a nerve" with the direction that you took Severus . . . I absolutely loved it! (she snivels with a romantic gleam in her eyes)
Most sincerely,
Victoria Prince
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it!
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. And as for the 'sort of ' sex scene, it was good. Keep up the great work!
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this... I can just imagine hermione blurting out that she loves him. But I wish she hadn't kept walking away from him... it would have left room for more snogging!