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for Esclavitud *Now Complete*

by tana97

person Anon
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I did really like this story, but after that chapter I kind of hate Harry too much to like it anymore, lol, seriously how cruel can he be? I know it's fictional but still, lol.
person AkaneIkeda
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You
person Sunday
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO! It doesn't work like that! Charlie isn't good enough for Harry! Take it baaack!
person Hotary
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story so sweet and beautiful written, great job I must said...
person cravedom
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Arrrg! That friking asshole! Correction those assholes. Do you think Charlie knew? He had to know! I am almost mad enough to not want to read what sexy things he does with Harry. But right after I want them to suffer and Severus to get some justice. He was doing so good!

I love it when you are mean to the characters ;p
person kunitsu
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww poor Severus, I wish Harry would just cuddle him. Somehow I get the feeling that Charlie is planning something, I wonder how much of an effect this will have on Harry and Severus's relationship. Cant wait for the next chapter
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Can I kill Charlie? I feel like killing him.
Maybe smack Harry and smell the coffee...


I never hated Charlie before, but I hate him in this story.
person kunitsu
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was greast progress for Severus although I am bit worried about that comment Severus made
person poohbear74
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
person mls1971
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!

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