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for Child of New Beginnings

by triz

schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent.
person neelix
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He's going to find it very hard to overcome this one. Poor Severus...poor Hermione.
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! You can't leave it there!! You just can't!!!
*whimpers* It's just that good.
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a horrible tease!!! way too short! great story by the way.
person neelix
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome... but over far too soon!!!

Can't wait to see what he says to Hermione.....
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it can't wait for more
person marcia
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not sure I like the bit about how Bella knew of Sebastian. I think it should have been a bit more complected. Other than that not bad, I look forward to more updates. I assume Lucious' instinct is to take her to St. Mungos which would cause quite the uproar when people notice him there with his 'other woman'. Interesting choice of Death Eaters you rarely see Regulus and Karkaroff as escapees.
person neelix
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, nine chapters in...it's time Severus knew the truth!
person rox4787
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update update update update update update update please please please please please please please please please please update soon love it cant wait to read more please please update soon

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