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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oohhhh sh-----t! bum bum buuummm
very intriguing! can't wait to see where this goes!
very intriguing! can't wait to see where this goes!
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has great possibilities. Ilove the plot thus far and I hope you are a author that updates frequently. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good start!
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh no! more?
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice start,,,,Lucius as MOM makes me shudder a bit. SO here is my question....If he raped her at the revel, how do you plan to get them together? Forgiving your rapist and loving them isn't something that happens....so I am curious to see how you resolve this. I will waiting and reading!
Happy Writing!!
S_G
Happy Writing!!
S_G
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You just had to leave it there didn't you! Your story just got more interesting. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice start! I can see Lucius as a 'good guy' ( emotional sigh,,,,,)
anyhoo...all i want to nitpic is Revel not Rebel....
**tosses some carrots to the plot bunnies!***
anyhoo...all i want to nitpic is Revel not Rebel....
**tosses some carrots to the plot bunnies!***
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG :O plz continue!
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww lucius is sooo nice :)
love it!
love it!